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Tuesday, 11 December 2007

Mission 4: Betrayal




Timothius looked up from the note he had just read. His face wrinkled in confusion. What was going on? Well he was never the one to back down from danger; so he grabbed the handheld device.
Instantly, the device turned on and a long beam shot out and scanned his face. The beam disappeared and a green light appeared on the screen. “Identity confirmed, welcome Timothius Danaford,” the device said in a mechanic voice.
Suddenly, Cathy appeared on the screen; Tim quickly realized that she had recorded a message for him. “Hello Tim,” Cathy said. “Thank you for helping me, I really appreciate it.” She coughed and continued. “I’ve got a problem, and I don’t know how else to explain it to you so I’ll jump right in. The emperor isn’t who you think he is. He has been committing several illegal and deceptive actions behind our backs and all the other citizens of the Touch� Empire. Including executing supposed ‘criminals’ without giving them a fair trial, stealing money from the people and using it for his own personal benefits, and much more. I’ve only recently learned about this, and I don’t know if the emperor’s found out about how much I know yet. Help me Timothius, you are my only hope.” The video shut off and a mechanical voice said, “This device will self-destruct in… 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.” The device disintegrated into a wisp of smoke, leaving Tim sitting with a shocked expression on his face.
“I can’t believe this,” Tim said to himself. “I knew that the emperor was a little shady, but this? I guess I should have seen it coming.” He shook his head and sighed. Suddenly, a thought crossed his mind. If the emperor found out, then Cathy would be in danger! He had to protect her, but how?
Just then, his work phone rang. Timothius answered it, “Hello.”
“Hello, Timothius,” said a voice. It was the emperor!
“Emperor! How are you?” Tim exclaimed, trying not to sound nervous
“Fine, fine, I heard about Ryan and Laz. They ran through a house fire to save those documents, incredible. Those two are amazing,” he said somewhat blandly. Timothius frowned; was it his imagination or did the emperor actually seem disappointed?
“The reason I was calling,” he continued. “Was to see if you’re available. I have a job for you, and it only requires one man.”
“Sure,” Tim said warily. “I’ll be right there.”
“Thank you, and Tim.”
“Yes?”
“Don’t be late.”
Timothius swallowed. “I won’t,” he hung up the phone. He tried to shake the thoughts he was thinking out of his head, but he couldn’t. “There’s no way he could know what I know,” he said aloud. Somehow, though, that wasn’t very convincing. He had a feeling that the emperor had already found him and Cathy out.
He reached over and picked up his other, personal phone, the one with a scrambler on it. Quickly, he dialed Ryan Cruise’s number. Somebody had to keep an eye on Cathy. Timothius trusted and, at the same time, didn’t trust Ryan to get the job done; but he had no one else to turn to.

Ryan and Laz were hanging out at Ryan’s house, playing video games when Tim called.
Ryan grabbed his cell phone and flipped it open. “Hey Tim, what’s happening?”
“A lot of stuff,” Timothius replied, breathing nervously. “Listen Cruise, I need your help. Is Laz with you?”
“Yeah, he’s right here.”
“Good, could you keep an eye on Cathy for me, please?”
Ryan gave the phone a strange look before remembering that Tim couldn’t see him through the phone. “Keep an eye on her, why?”
“Because, I think she might be in danger.”
“From what?” Ryan asked.
“You mean from who, and I don’t think I’ll tell you that just yet.”
Ryan frowned. “Okay fine, I’ll look out for her, you don’t have to get all secretive on me.”
“Thanks,” Timothius thanked him and hung up.
“How do you like that?” Ryan said.
“What?” Laz asked. He had been intently listening in on the conversation, trying to figure out what they were saying.
“Tim wants us to ‘keep an eye on Cathy’.”
“Why?”
“I don’t know,” Ryan shrugged. “Oh well, I guess it couldn’t hurt. Wonder where she it now?”
Laz grinned. “Don’t worry, I’ll track her. It’s my specialty.”

A few minutes later they had tracked Cathy to her location at the Imperial Mall by using her cell phone. They hopped in Ryan’s Porsche and whizzed away to the mall.
“That was too easy,” Laz commented when they had arrived. “If Cathy thinks she’s in danger, why is she at the mall?”
Ryan shrugged. “It’s a perfect place for a handoff.”
“And for a murder,” Laz pointed out.
They both nodded and agreed that they would have to keep an eye out for suspicious-looking people. They got of the car and warily made their way towards the mall entrance.
“Look at that guy,” Ryan pointed to a young teenager who was hurrying out of the mall and clutching his coat. “He looks suspicious.”
Laz shrugged. “What’s so suspicious about him?”
Suddenly a whole group of security guards ran out of the building after the teenager and tackled him. A bunch of expensive items came flying out of his jacket and fell to the floor. “Wait, NO!” the teen cried. “I bought this stuff, I swear!”
“That’s not what the security camera says,” one of the guards said, and they took him away in handcuffs.
“Okay,” Laz admitted. “So maybe you were right.”

Meanwhile, Timothius was on his way to the emperor’s palace. “I hope those two aren’t doing anything stupid.” He smacked his forehead. “What am I saying? Of course they’re doing something stupid. I just hope it works.”
He drove up to the palace, passed the normal security check and sat down in the emperor’s waiting room. After a few minutes, Timothius was called into the emperor’s office and told to sit and wait.
He looked all around, wondering where the emperor could be. There was a tall chair at the emperor’s desk that was facing the opposite direction of Timothius. Tim coughed and ventured to say, “Um, sir, are you there?” Suddenly, the chair whirled around to reveal… no one. “Uh, okay. I still can’t see you,” Timothius said, bewildered.
There was a loud sigh, and the chair started to rise. As the chair raised the emperor started to appear, he was pumping the chair up slowly so that he could see over the desk.
“There, can you see me now?”
“Much better, sir. New chair?”
The emperor gave an annoyed look. “Yes.” He cleared his throat. “The reason I called you here is because I have another mission for you, if you choose to accept it. As you know, many writers have been criticizing my way of ruling the empire. I want you to find all the writers that I have on this list and take them out.” He pushed a list over towards Timothius with a whole list of names. “This is my empire, and I won’t have anyone obstructing the peace with this libel. Make them realize that this isn’t a democracy, but a dictatorship and what I say goes.”
Timothius swallowed hard. In all his years serving the emperor, he’d never been asked to kill innocent people. While the emperor may claim that these writers weren’t innocent, Tim believed that they were and he couldn’t kill them with a clean conscience.
“I’m sorry, sir, but I can’t do that.”
“Excuse me?” the emperor said, anger in his voice.
“I said that I can’t do that,” Timothius repeated bravely. “You said, ‘if you choose to accept,’ and I don’t accept.
The emperor gave an unhappy sigh. “That’s just for show. It sounds cool.” He glared at Timothius. “You do know what happened to the last person that refused to obey one of my assignments, don’t you?”
Timothius nodded solemnly. He had heard of the infamous secret agent, Travis, who had infuriated the emperor by refusing to obey orders. He was later thrown to a pit of sharks by the emperor himself.
“Then why are you refusing to obey?” the emperor asked.
“Because, I can’t go against my conscience. Risking my life for the empire is one thing, going against my moral beliefs is another.”
“I feared that it would come to this,” the emperor shook his head.
Suddenly, Tim felt himself being grabbed by strong hands. He looked up and saw two, strong guards above him.
“Take him to the dungeon,” the emperor commanded.
They drug him out of the emperor’s office and down into the dungeons
“Help! Somebody help me!” Timothius called. They knocked him on the head and he slumped to the floor. Then they dragged him, unconscious, towards the dungeon.

Cathy knew something had to be up when she saw Ryan at the mall, and she was doubly confirmed when she glimpsed Laz slipping into the crowd. Perhaps they were there to save her, or maybe they were working for the emperor.
She was waiting in the mall for some information about the emperor that a certain reporter was supposed to hand to her at this spot, but the report hadn’t shown yet and she was getting worried. Plus, there was a young brunette that Cathy was sure was watching her. Cathy glanced back up to where the brunette had been a second ago and noticed that she had disappeared. That could be a bad sign.
Cathy started to move, that reporter wasn’t going to show up she decided. She reached into her pocket and, to her surprise, found a two-way radio in her pocket. Curious, Cathy took the radio out of her pocket and spoke into it. “Who is this?” she asked.
“A friend,” came a familiar voice.
Cathy sighed. “It’s you, Ryan.”
“Yes, how did you know?”
Cathy rolled her eyes. “Wild guess?”
Ryan didn’t respond for a minute and then his voice came through the radio again. “Cathy, you’re in danger.”
“You can say that again.”
“Okay, Cathy, you’re in danger.”
“No that’s not what I… oh, never mind.”
“Anyways, you need to follow my directions exactly. There’s a sniper watching you at this very moment.”
“Really? How do you know?”
“Instinct,” Ryan replied. “Instinct, my girl.” He paused. “Actually, I have no idea, I was just guessing.”
Normally, Cathy would have made some sort of remark, but she was worried right at the moment. “So, how do I get out of here?”
“Follow my instructions,” Ryan ordered. “Bend over like you’re tying your shoes.”
Cathy frowned. “I’m wearing flip flops.”
“Just do it, okay! They’ll lose you in the crowd.”
Cathy obeyed and bent over as if to tie her shoes.
“Now,” Ryan continued. “Crawl around like you lost something and make your way to the bathroom.”
Cathy followed his instructions and slipped inside the ladies’ bathroom. “Now what?” she asked.
“Now, wait for my signal and make a break for the door.”
Cathy started to panic. “But what if the people decide to come in here before you give the order?”
“Then you’ll probably die,” Ryan replied. “Oh, sorry, did I say that out loud?”
Cathy glowered and would have strangled him if he were within reach. “I hate you,” she growled.
“You’re not the first person to say that,” Ryan admitted.
“You are impossible!” Cathy hissed into the radio.

To be continued next week...

71 comments:

Big Red said...

this mission is going to be a little more serious, in an IMF definition of the word...

Drama Queen said...

ok, cool. To be honest, i think the stories just got ten times better now that im in them. ;D Jk, but this is a good one, tense to.

Big Red said...

haha. yeah, thanks. :)

Thrawn said...

Nice, Ryan. I'm already anticipating next Tuesday, even though I know whats going to happen.

Drama Queen said...

how do u always kno so much bout these stories?

micheller said...

good story. i enjoyed it.

although the beginning part with the message was a huge take-off of the incredibles.=D

Big Red said...

Actually, if u've ever seen Mission IMpossible, the Incredibles was a huge take off of it, not to mention other movies... I wasn't taking the 'this device will self-destruct in, 5,4,3,2,1' thing from the INcredibles i was taking it from Mission: IMpossible.

Thrawn said...

Ha ha, yeah, the incredibles movie is a huge take off of dozens of movies. Including Mission Impossible. I still don't see why everyone says "OMG, DA INCRDBLES IS DA BEST MOVIE EVERSS!! LOLS!!"

And I usually know so much about the stories because the writers (Tim, Ryan) are two of my best friends, and we talk about the stories a lot.

just kinda maybe sorta honest said...

Yeah...OMG IT'SSSSSSS THE BEST STORY EVER....well at least I hope so...=P

Just wait till the good part...heh heh heh

Big Red said...

oh no, u gotta b kidding me!

Big Red said...

another 1 post blog! Why havn't i seen that 1 befor?

pink princess said...

very exciting. i like it. but why is the emperor bad? he's nvr been bad bfore. oh, and whoever this new alias is, just ignore them.

Drama Queen said...

da alias is tim, and its not new. he has had it 4 a while. and kayla, since when has the emperor NOT been bent on evil?

Thrawn said...

Yep, it's tim. COMPNOR is another alias-spin-off of a star wars company. Old alias or not, all these shady characters are driving me past the line of insanity (if I havn't past that line in the past ;) ) Tim, stop using alias's or I will be forced to do absolutly nothing. But, really, just use IMF.

The German Mafia said...

very good as usual

Big Red said...

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
another alias.

atalie said...

i liked the story.

Big Red said...

u must also realize jonah that i hav absolute power 2 kill u off whenever i feel like it. in the next post i could write: 'and a piano suddenly fell out of the sky and crushed the emperor into a pile of jelly' or something like that. so u better b nice...

Imperator said...

I am being nice!!!!! And anyways who are you to detirmine the Emotions of Society. *That was just in an British accent* I have a story too, so I can do the same.

Thrawn said...

You're story won't have as big of an impact on society, though, Jonah. :D Besides, Ryan isn't in your story anyways, remember? :D

The Gestapo said...

Ah...Ryan...We have had a track record on you for quite some time. A threat against the emperor is an attempt on the emperor's life. Your actions displease him. It is you who had better be nice.

We are afraid, however, niceness will not save you from the emperor's fate now. *Claps*
(Guards with Kairos armbands aproach and take him away...)

It appears your stories may become reality if you are not careful, Cruise.

The Gestapo said...

However we're supposed to punish you, that is...considering we are armed with only keyboards and mousepads....

Debater said...

What??
You know, Ryan, if you didn't make such a big deal about hating aliases, I don't think you'd get so many (even though COMPNOR has been around for a long time)

Whatever. At any rate, good post! This is the best one yet. IMF is good when it's serious. Although the funny ones are good, too, its taken more seriously when its serious(obviously).

So I take it this is the long publicized betrayal....Where do I stand in it?

Big Red said...

oooooh i'm really scared now. what's the gestapo gonna do? say mean things about me? And Laz is rite i'm not even in ur story so what could u possible do 2 me in ur story?

Nazis don't exist anymore by the way...

Big Red said...

American soldiers walk up 2 Gestapo and grab him by the shoulders. "sorry jerry, but it's time to go. Emperor's don't exist anymore, so give it up." They throw him in jail and go back 2 thier duty, fighting for freedom from control freaks like the emperor...

Imperator said...

What the Gestapo gonna do? Are you familiar with the Holocaust, buddy?
Ryan, you ARE in my stories. You come later in it! No need to tell me what is in MY stories, Lazarus.
I'll tell you what's in it, your death! HA HA HA HA!

Nazis do exist. Do you know a person Called Jonah???? Well, Not really. But in a way.

The American soldiers who walk behind the gestapo are taken by suprise when a german Mafia car drives by and shoot the Americans and the Gestapo agent.
Such is the cost of war.
No one can beat the Fatherland or Zie Fuher.


No Emperors anymore?

1. The Germans weren't an Empire

2. No Emperors? WHAT ABOUT ME????
Emperor Jonah!!!!
THe F.A.E.?????
The Secretary of defense? Tim!
The General of the armies? Chris!
People of the Empire!!
Have you forgotten what you serve?
You are an IMF agent? Do you remember the pledge you swore?
You are an Imperial mission force agent!!! Imperial- Empire-Emperor!
That is what you are fighting for!
What is an IMF agent's duty?
To protect the Emperor, at ALL cost!
An Emperor!

Forget the principles of Freedom! That's childish! Stop getting the scraps of Democracy and freedom when you can get the whole Enchilada of Imperialisim!!!!!!

You will never Control 'Freaks' like Emperors! They are never surpassable!!! FOR ZIE EMPIRE!!!!!!!!!

You think that's it cruise? No, it's only the beggening! THe Revival will begin!!!! HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!

Drama Queen said...

oh stop it everyone. Gestapo, other guy, if u want to threaten, take it to the peoples mayor, he likes weirdos like u. i think its really silly that u all are getting mad at each other because of ur stories.

Grenadier said...

I know whats gonna happen to catie or " Cathy " also.

If you have seen the Bourne: Ultimatem

you will know whats going to happen

Big Red said...

oh and the Fuher is dead, sorry 2 bring u 2 that realization but it's true. he committed suicide by the way, what a coward.

Imperator said...

I was not defending the holocaust. I was just saying that the Gestapo can do lots. I don't care if you make me die foolishly. I heard you were doing that anyway. I don't want to ruin your amusemant of killing me in your stories though in reality that isn't feasible. Dream all you want, I don't want to spoil your little fantasy. But facts are facts. Have fun in your little world.

Imperator said...

FOR ZIE FATHERLAND!!! Hail Emperor Jonah!

The Gestapo said...

The Gestapo surrounds the complex with black cars bearing agents loaded with weapons. These traitors are just the ones that need eliminating...

Big Red said...

fact is Jonah, your not an emperor so u just hav fun in ur little world pretending that u hav an empire and that the gestapo still exists, but don't start dissing freedom and everything this country stands for. i don't know about u but i'm an American and i'm proud of it.

Drama Queen said...

to grenaider:

Tim told me im da first one to die, and i am thinking that means i dont come back since laz and ryan and tim have already died a lot. if dats true, how come i dont get to ressurect?

Big Red said...

Tim shouldn't b telling u how the story goes becuz he doesn't even now how it ends. of course... neither do i :) we havn't really finished it yet. u'll just hav 2 wait and see

Delta73 said...

I told her that befor we even finished writing the 3rd one....sorry

Drama Queen said...

dang it

Delta73 said...

No really I am very sorry.

Delta73 said...

What is so "Dang it?"

Drama Queen said...

that i dont know if i die or not. THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME FOR YOU!

Drama Queen said...

meaning that u dont have to do it in the stories, cause the supsense already did...

Delta73 said...

Indeed it is...^-^

Delta73 said...

Hmmmm there's an Idea

Drama Queen said...

what?

Delta73 said...

killing someone by suspense...maybe not..

Big Red said...

that would b kinda funny... i don't know. The suspense is killing u Catie? good, that's good, must mean the story's good. :)

Drama Queen said...

well i want to know if cathy lives on or not. it's not easy seeing a form of yourself in danger.

Thrawn said...

Ah!!! I had to read all the comments because I've been absent from the commetns for one day..

Jonah, You've really gone too far. Having any favor towards the gestapo, hitler, or the Natzi's is just sick. Don't even bring the holocaust into the subject. Sometimes you take death far to easily.

And Cathy may die, or she may not. Anyone up for taking bets? ;D

Drama Queen said...

sheesh, talk about taking deaths to easily

Big Red said...

it's all fiction just remember that. if i kill u in the story it won't actually kill u. hopefully... ;)

Big Red said...

so w/ tat said, who wants 2 take bets! jk

Big Red said...

oh i wouldn't place them, i'd just take the bets in u know. :)

Thrawn said...

Nice idea! Then have everyone lose.. smart. :D

Imperator said...

To Lazarus

Oh, so if it's in IMF death is okay.
Look at this double standerd(Sp?)
HYPOCRITE!!!!!!
Favoring the Nazis is sick, huh?
Well I got news, I am not the only sick one!! I am not 'Gestapo'! So SOMEONE else needs condemming!
(Personally, I think Gestapo is Chris)
To Ryan-
"you're not Emperor" Okay, that may be true, but I would like to note that Everyone acknoledges me as Emperor. You Yourself make my Character 'Emperor Jonah'. But thats beside the point. Your arguement is most certianly Valid.
As for bashing Freedom, I would like to make one point.

Recent studies came out with a study that shows the eight most succesful countries the earth has ever seen.
1.Rome (As an Empire)
2. America (A Democracy)
3. Engaland (During their Empire)
4. Greece (During their Empire)
5. Germany (As a dictatorship)
6. Soviet Union (As an Empire)
7. France (Under Napoleon's Empire)
8. Spain (During their Empire)

Notice that seven of them were Empires Or Monarchies and only one was a DEmocracy. If America, By using freedom, Managed to be the second greatest Nation without being an Empire, if it was an Empire, How much more great can it be? No other Democratic Nations were on that list 'till number 25. If America Achieved so much as a Democracy, that it could rise that high. If it were an Empire, How much higher will it rise? I rest my case!

Big Red said...

and what studies would those b exactly? and mite i point out that everyone one of those empires fell apart, pathetically. people started to rebel against them becuz they were opressive and against freedom. people don't want emperors anymore. and i, for one, do not acknowledge u as emperor. my story is fiction, just like ur empire.

Thrawn said...

Jonah,

If you think that we sincerely believe you are the emperor, then you've got some rethinking to do. It's pretty sad how you think of Dictatorships. Because, guess what? Everyone hates them! I don't know where you got those results, but I consider those slightly incorrect.

Also, I'm no hypocrite. IMF is a story! Get that through your head. The Gestapo (whoever it is) is just playing, while on the other hand you're taking it seriously! Remember "What the Gestapo gonna do? Are you familiar with the Holocaust, buddy?"

I hate to break it too you, Jonah, but one truly wants you to be emperor. It was fun while the pretending lasted, but you've gone too far.

Imperator said...

'Gone to far'
For your infromation, I barely mentioned me being Emperor since the Santa Rosa Tournement. I REsigned as being Emperor, but everyone begged that I became emperor again.


Granted, the Holacaust was wrong, but the soviets did much worse.

Big Red said...

that doesn't excuse siding w/ the Nazis. and from now on any anit-American comments *coghhs in Jonah's direction* will b deleted on this blog.

Drama Queen said...

oooooooookay...this is definitly one contreversy that would be nice if it stopped. like now.

Thrawn said...
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Big Red said...

yes your majesty. whatever u say. ;) that was actually supposed 2 b the end rite there, so i get the last word and everything...

Imperator said...

What I meant by the holacaust is that Ryan asked what the gestapo could do to him, so I said do you know what the gestapo did to the jews, in basic terms. My point was that the gestapo shouldn't be brushed off.

You know lazarus, you take the gestapo so lightly.

Sound familier?

Thrawn said...

Crap... I'm gonna go ahead delete my comment, I didn't know Ryan was supposed to say the last word. My apologies.

Imperator, I'm done arguing. cough--even-though-nazi's-are-
no-longer-on-the-planet---cough.

Big Red said...

it's ok, u didn't hav 2 delete it. but whatever. yah, they kinda-cough- lost the war-cough- so sorry.

Thrawn said...

Haha, yeah.

Anyways, on a lighter subject, I'm gonna have to say my favorite part in the story was when..

“Then you’ll probably die,” Ryan replied. “Oh, sorry, did I say that out loud?”

pink princess said...

lol, yah, tat was one of my favs too.

Da man said...

heh, heh, mine too. fits Cruise's profile so well...

da man said...

ok dont start using da man again!! jk..

just wanted 2 do this 2 say that both of me (de man and da man) is me (Ryan). just wntd everyne 2 know that so that i could put dat to rest..

Thrawn said...

Okay, guys. Kill the alias's! I thought that stage ended already..

Big Red said...

yes, yes, it is over. and i don't think killing them would do any good. they've already been killed a dozen times.

Drama Queen said...

is the new post coming?