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Tuesday, 18 December 2007

Mission 4: Betrayal Part 2

Ryan was watching Cathy from his perch several stories up. Laz was standing next to him, watching every suspicious person. Ryan had no idea were the sniper was hiding, but he was almost positive that there was one. He had a suspicion that it was a young brunette that he had been watching. She had been acting rather strangely and he was almost sure that she had been tailing Cathy earlier. Now she had disappeared, not a good sign.
Ryan spoke into his radio, “Just calm down, Cathy, and wait for my signal.”
“I’m trying to,” came the distressed response. “But you’re not helping.”
“She has a point there,” Laz commented.
Cathy’s voice came through again. “This is taking too long; when are you going to signal?”
“Now, go now!” Ryan yelled into the radio. Cathy burst from the bathroom and ran as fast as she could towards the door. She was almost to the door when she suddenly jerked forward and fell on her face.
Ryan and Laz whirled around to see a gun barrel being pulled out of from in between a vent in the wall a couple of stories up. Panic started to rise up in the two agent’s minds; Ryan thought of all the things he could say, what he could scream. He tried to sort all of these out in his mind and say the best one, but all that came out was, “oops.”
Laz flinched. “Ouch, headshot.”
The entire mall was going crazy by now; Cathy was lying dead on the floor, blood flowing from her head. There was no way that she would be coming back anytime soon. Ryan and Laz searched for a place to hide. They had no doubt that that sniper was coming after them now. Seeing a woman’s clothing store behind them, they ducked inside. This brought several strange glances from everyone inside, but the people quickly forgot about them when Cathy’s death became known. Everyone stampeded out of the store and drove away as fast as possible.
“Where do we go now?” Laz asked.
“Anywhere but here,” Ryan replied. They rushed out of the store and charged down the hall. They looked up to see a masked woman running with them on the floor above, or at least they assumed it was a woman because of her long hair. They stopped and started to turn around, but the woman jumped down in front of them and cut off their route.
“Wait,” she said, pulling off the mask. “I’m a friend.” She shook her head and flipped her brown hair back. Her brown eyes did indeed seem friendly, but they also seemed troubled.
“Wait,” Ryan said. “You’re that brunette that was following Cathy.”
She nodded. “That’s right, and my name’s Sarah.” A question started to form on the two agent’s lips but Sarah answered it before they could ask. “I was trying to protect Cathy from that sniper, but obviously, I couldn’t.” She led them inside a door that said employees only. “We should probably lay low for a while,” she advised. “That sniper could be looking for us.”
“How do we know that you’re not the sniper?” Laz asked.
She smiled. “You don’t.”
Laz groaned. “I hate it when people say that.” He motioned for Ryan to come with him and meet in the corner of the room.
“How do we know if we can trust her?” Laz asked.
Ryan shrugged. “Well, she is pretty.” It was true, the mysterious woman looked like she could easily win a beauty pageant if she tried.
Laz rolled his eyes. “What’s that got to do with anything?”
Ryan threw up his hands. “I don’t know, I was just saying.”
“Besides,” Laz said. “Haven’t you ever noticed that all girls in any secret agent story are always good-looking? No matter if they’re good or bad. If they’re not then they’re killed off right away.”
Ryan frowned. “That’s not true.”
Just then a homely cleaning lady burst through the door. Her face was covered in zits and she had a huge scowl on her face. “What the heck are you three doing here!” she bellowed. She started to let loose a flurry of curse words at them, but she was suddenly shot in the head and she sank to the floor.
“See what I mean?” Laz said smugly.
Ryan stroked his chin. “Maybe you’ve got a point there.”
Sarah grabbed them both by the arm and dragged them out the back door. “Come on,” she said. “We don’t want to meet whoever was on the other end of that gunshot.”
They rushed out the door and onto a fire escape that was out back. They ran down the stairs as fast as possible. As they were running, bullets started flying all around them. Whoever was above them was shooting at them! Ryan looked up and tried to see who it was that was shooting at them but he could never get a good look. They dodged the bullets and sped down the stairs until they reached the ground.
“Come on,” Ryan called. “Our car is right here.” They all jumped inside Ryan’s Porsche and Ryan stepped on the gas. They peeled out of the parking lot and drove away. Once they were farther away, Ryan slowed down.
“So Sarah, I don’t believe we ever told you our names. Name’s Cruise… Ryan Cruise.” He stuck out his hand and Sarah shook it.
“Do you steal all your lines from James Bond movies, or just a mix of secret agent movies?” she asked, trying to cover her smile.
“Who me? Of course not.” Ryan acted surprised.
“I’m Laz,” Laz offered.
“Hi Laz,” Sarah said. “In case you’re wondering, I work for IMF.”
“You do?” Ryan was shocked. “So do we!”
“Really?” Sarah said. “Well at least I won’t have to explain what it is to you then. That’s always a problem.”
“Yeah, we get that a lot to,” Ryan nodded. “How come we’ve never seen you before if you work for IMF?”
“There’s more than one team that works for IMF, you know.” Sarah pointed out.
Ryan paused for a second. “There is?”
Sarah raised an eyebrow. “Yeah, didn’t you know that?”
Ryan coughed. “Yeah, yeah, of course I did.”
Laz spoke up again from the back, “he’s lying.”
Sarah grinned again, it seemed as if she couldn’t help but smile at Ryan. “Yeah, I guessed as much.” Then she turned serious. “Well, I used to work for IMF. My team was dismantled a few weeks ago and I’ve been on the run ever since.”
Ryan frowned. “Dismantled? What do you mean?”
Sarah made a slashing motion across her throat with her finger.
Laz flinched. “I’m sorry, we know what it feels like to lose a team member.”
Sarah frowned and folded her arms. “Not every agent. I lost every man and every woman. I’m the only one left.”
Ryan drove up to his house and parked the car. “Do you have any idea who’s behind this?” he asked.
Sarah looked at him. “I’ll give you one guess.”
Ryan thought for a minute while they got out of the car. “Space aliens?”
Sarah shook her head. “No, of course not. The emperor.”
“Why would he take out his own IMF team?” Laz asked.
Sarah lowered her voice to a whisper. “Because, we know too much.”
“Know what?” Ryan scratched his head.
Sarah gave a frustrated look. “Well you don’t have to worry about it. Because you’re obviously clueless!” She walked away and sat down on the curb.
Ryan looked at Laz and shrugged. “What’d I say?”
Laz only shrugged back. “You understand woman better than I do.”
“But I don’t understand woman at all.”
“Exactly.”
Just then, Ryan’s cell phone rang. Ryan flipped it open, “Yo.”
“Ryan,” came a woman’s voice. “This is Kayla.”
“Kayla,” Ryan said. “Just the woman I needed to talk to. We’ve got an angry girl on our hands and I don’t know what to do.”
Kayla ignored his comment. “Tim’s been captured, Ryan.”
“What? By who?” Ryan asked, shocked.
“I don’t know,” Kayla replied. “The emperor would only tell me that he was on a mission by himself and he fell into enemy hands.”
“Great,” Ryan sighed. “Two agents in one day.”
“What?” now it was Kayla’s turn to be surprised. “What’re you talking about?”
Ryan paused. “I don’t know how to say this but… Cathy’s dead.”
For a few seconds, Ryan was met with nothing but shocked silence. Then Kayla nearly exploded. “Dead? What do you mean, dead? How is that possible? You’re lying!”
Ryan held the phone from his ear. “What do I say, Laz?” he asked.
Laz shrugged. “I don’t know any better than you do.”
Kayla started to burst into tears on the other end of the line. “Look, Kayla, please don’t cry.”
Kayla sniffed. “Okay, what do you need me to do?” she asked in a shaky voice.
“Well,” Ryan thought. “Have all the agents gather here for a meeting. At least, all the agents we have left…”
Kayla started to burst into tears again. “Oops, I didn’t mean that last part Kayla. Don’t worry, Cathy won’t die in vain; we’ll find out what she knew if we die trying… that was just a figure of speech, we’re not gonna die.”

To be continued...

52 comments:

Big Red said...

and after that short break, we continue with our story...

sorry about that Catie...

Imperator said...

That was good. I don't think I would send some troops to kill Catie or arrest Tim though. And My comments were not anti American, I was just saying that the Gestapo should not be taken lightly if they killed millions of people.

Delta73 said...

Perhaps....

Debater said...

Good, but it seemed to gloss over seemingly important things. Like Catie just makes a rush for it and falls over dead- with all the buildup it might have been a little dramatic....

and explaining the reason for betrayal would have helped, also- it seemed like an arbitrary cover for the setting....

It may just be me, as I like writing things longer etc, but other than that, as I said- probably the best mission yet...`

Big Red said...

u could say that Cathy's death was a bit anti-climactic. it was kinda intended... thanks for ur critics.

Thrawn said...

haha! Nice Ryan. I know I say this alot, but this was the best mission yet. I liked the part where non-good-looking girls get killed off. lol.

jonah, let it go. The arguments dead. Ryan said the last words, remember?

Grenadier said...

That " Non-pretty girl " part was hilarious! good job guys

Thrawn said...

Oh BTW:

What is with

"The Administrator of this Blog would like to apologize to Michelle for continuing to press and tease her about the ‘Brutally honest’ Alias.

The Staff would also like to let the commenters know that NO Anti-American sentiments are appreciated or welcomed on this blog.


Thank you, that is all..."

???? I thought there were two administrators, and since when does IMF have a staff?? The post itself is fine, if not a bit confusing, but what's with all the titles?

Big Red said...

ask tim, i don't know. and Tim has yet to promote me 2 admin. *hint, hint,* even though i do all the posting now.

Drama Queen said...

aww c'mon...i get shot and die???? HA, I WAS RIGHT, I DO DIE!!! But even so, couldnt it have been a bit more dramatic, like my last few dieing words or something?????? Oh well....why do i even bother

Big Red said...

well u know, most people don't get last words after they're shot in the head... sorry u didn't like ur death.

Drama Queen said...

oh, and do i get to come back..make an amazing ressurection or something?

Big Red said...

uh yeah sure... u come back 2 life after u've been shot in the head, sure. ;) i don't know actually. i haven't finished it yet...

Delta73 said...

Meh, maybe we'll bring you back so we can kill you off again. ;)

Drama Queen said...

*typed in a sarcastic manner* gee, i feel special.

Big Red said...

well it was Tim's idea 2 kill u off. i was like, 'we gotta hav somebody get sniped in the next story.' and tim was like, 'oooh, how about Catie?' jk. but it was his idea. we've been planning this for months. *rubs hands together* ;)

Drama Queen said...

well, its not that i mind being killed so much, but that ryan and laz manage to come back to life after being blown to bits, but cathy "might" come back after merely being shot!

Thrawn said...

That's simply because Ryan and Laz are... I dunno, Ryan and Laz! Anyways, what good book doesn't have someone killed eventually? Besides, we planned this since the bourne ultimatim. And you didn't see that idiot in the movie come back, now did you? :D

Drama Queen said...

ok, first off, i never saw that movie.
second, u calling me an idiot???? *Glares daggers in Thrawns direction*
thirdly, this isnt a book, unless ur planning on getting it published.
fourthly, what does u and ryan being u and ryan have anything to do with this???
fifthly, u mentioned that every good book has someone killed, but if u read ur stories, at least 30 civilians have been killed, Q and M were supposed to be killed, the last guy to refuse to go on a mission was killed, all of sarahs team was killed, and u, ryan, tim, and now me have all been killed!!!!

I just don't see the logic behind this.

Drama Queen said...

oh, and that ugly lady w/ the pimples got killed.

Drama Queen said...

oh yeah, that little kid in the second story who ate the bubble gum and exploded, he died too. aaaaannnd...i think thats it.

Big Red said...

and sixthly, wait, it is six, rite? man, that was a lot of points! ;) yeah, a lot of people hav died, but if u look at the stories, it never actually shows Ryan or Laz dieing, ever. they just survived... somehow. :D Second, or is it seventh i'm not sure? people w/ two lines or less don't count for people getting killed. They're like background people. not real characters.

Big Red said...

it's a good thing we shot down that IMF story in Cambodia tat Tim was writing... becuz about twice as many people that hav died in the history of IMF die in like the first 10 minutes of that one... 2 say the least, it was kinda violent. So if u think a lot of people hav died so far, u havn't seen nothing ;)

Delta73 said...

yeah, that was kinda violent... :p It was based on Black Hawk Down.

Drama Queen said...

well, i was just responding to thrawns comment saying u have to have someone die in a good book. and dont forget tim was seen dieing,(like a phoenix rising from the ashes) and it says that u and laz felt their world engulfed in darkness, and something about coming back from the DEAD is hard work....and jack and jill died, and they had more than two lines. soooo...ya.

Big Red said...

okay, okay, u win. :) and Jack and Jill's sole existence was 2 die, so that doesn't really count either

Imperator said...

Double standerd again, huh Cruise?
It's okay if the MIghty Laz or Ryan does anything, killing, coming to life, saying brutal things, but when someone else does it, it's condemable.

Where is blogspot's Justice???????

'Sole exsistence is to die' if I said that, they would say "Your strange or Violent.
You guys better stop offending people.

'Because we are Laz and Ryan'.
So, you think you are superior to others? A Nazi?
What makes you so special?
You tell some jokes?
What makey YOU such a big shot?

Thrawn said...

I agree, Jonah. People really shouln't put themselves above others in REAL LIFE! Nazi's did that. There are a gazillion books and movies out there where some live and others die, but they are STORIES. Ryan and Laz survive for the sake of entertainment, not because were any better than anyone else. You need to losen up, Jonah.

Big Red said...

yeah, i was only kidding, Jack and Jill aren't even real, they were just a joke. IMF is fiction, but the holocaust was real. that's why we didn't like ur comment, becuz u were sounding very pro Nazi, and Anti-American. We on the other hand, never said anything pro Nazi so i'm not sure why you're calling me a Nazi. u should really lighten up.

Drama Queen said...

hey hey hey, its their blog, so they can do what they want. i am not saying i always like what they want, but as laz pointed out, they are just stories, and as long as these dont actually kill me, then i am ok. (but it would be really awsome if i came back)

Imperator said...

My point is that you can come back to life again, so it's okay, but when someone else wants to, thats never gonna happen.

Big Red said...

My point is tat we can write pretty much whatever we want 2. i'm just trying 2 make it work out for a good plot. if it works 2 bring Cathy back in the plot, then i will. I'm not sure what ur point is.

Thrawn said...

Jonah, It honestly sounds to me like you're shooting blindly in the dark at some way to disrupt IMF's comments by critizism that has no merit. I would stop it before any of us think your jelouse of IMF ;)

Now that I've used my fancay wurds, im gonaa go bac to tenessee where my pop learned me to talk american.

Big Red said...

thank u Laz. i was going 2 say something like tat but u said it better. ;)

no rlly? ur from da south? Dat's where i was learned me American too. those was some fancy wurds. ;) so random...

Delta73 said...

You tell em' Catie!

Debater said...

Whoah.It seems quite a bit has gone on...

i have to say I primarily agree with catie on this one...

However, jonah, many of your points aren't valid. I can see what your point is on taking violence light.y, but I believe the issue was not the violence, but the intent behind it. You shouldn't continue to defend anti americanism, etc, because it only draws suspicion to you, thinking you as 'gestapo' (Which I am near positive you aren't...)

I didn't see- what was this "anti american" sentiment? not to rekindle old arguments.....

As I said, though, Catie makes a good point in an IMF member being killed so lightly like that when the authors continue to imortalize themselves

Debater said...

so yeah...there's my 2 cents....or 3....

Big Red said...

says the critic before he's even finished reading the story...

and i really don't see who else could b gestapo, besides JOnah.

Thrawn said...

Excuse my asking, but why was my comment deleted?

Big Red said...

wait, what comment? i didn't delete any of ur comments.

Thrawn said...

Talk about fast responce... :D

Good to know it wasn't you. Must have been Tim. Unless, this sickness is really getting to me...

THe comment I had made was between Tim's comment and debaters comment. I made it at around 10:30 last night. Oh well.

Big Red said...

maybe u messed up and didn't actually post it, i've done that before, go ahead and post it again if u want

Drama Queen said...

since tomorow is....CHRISTMAS!!!!!! will u be putting up the new story?

Big Red said...

maybe, no promises though. i'm sure that everyone will drop their presents and come running 2 the computer. "IT's Tuesday!!!! Gottat read IMF!" jk. i don't know.

atalie said...

was that sarah agent made up?

Thrawn said...

["maybe, no promises though. i'm sure that everyone will drop their presents and come running 2 the computer. "IT's Tuesday!!!! Gottat read IMF!" jk. i don't know."]

I will. :D

And yes, Sarah is a completely random character. To the extent of my knowledge, at least.

Big Red said...

yes, i picked the most random name i could think of on purpose. i'm pretty sure i don't know anyone from around here named Sarah.

Drama Queen said...

i just realized something about the story.

The day tim gets cathy's message, he gets captured, cathy gets killed, and ryan and laz find a new agent!

Kinda ironic...

Big Red said...

what's so ironic about it?
and Sarah's not really a new agent, she's new 2 them.

pink princess said...

talk about an action packed day. oh, and if imf did decide to post the next part of the story i no that I wud come running to the computer. ;) wen does michelle come back into the picture. havnt heard about her for a while.
luvin the story guys. great job.

Thrawn said...

No story?!?!? Kidding... you should have made a christmas special... jk.

BTW, I'm pretty sure tim and ryan have a few ideas in mind for michelle, at least last time I checked, which was a short while ago.

Hol said...

Sarah?? Is this based on someone you know??

Is it my Sarah??